I constantly come across the first chapter of different books Avery is writing. I thought I'd share the one that was on the computer screen when I sat down tonight.
MERMAID lAGOON CHAPTER1:
THE lAGOON OF lOVE
one time,on a boat,out at sea,I was writing
a book aboat mermaids,it so happend,when I
lookd up,a slender thin green tail whippd
out of the water,and my frind,maria,had too
lookd up and seen it too!neck & neck we j-
umpd off.kelsie,my aunt,saw it all.she was
wailing loudly,thinking id'died.only when
lilly screechd she saw my head come up did
kelsie calm down enough too say; "is she-,
alive?"in a shakey squeeky voice."yes,-...
im pretty sure,"lilly squeekd.miles deep,i
was swimming deeper and deeper when i lookd
over my shoulder,and a mergirl caught up.
she jesjurd toward a lagoon labled:
"THE LAGOON OF LOVE"and you shoud see the
inside.pearls and dimonds filld the room!
i coud not bilive my eyes.the mergirl must
have sinced this,for she said:"you love the
buity of this place," "yes,"i said softly.
and that was true. (how coudent you?)
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